Saturday, May 14th, 2005 09:38 pm
Wahh.

The man can't do decent character development and introduces everyone through little chunks of exposition. Having said that the idea was great and once I was past the first painful 100[0] pages the remaining 393[1] were worth it.

The human race knows an omega cloud will arrive near Earth in a thousand years. It will wreak havoc but it is too far in the future for human governments to respond to meaningfully. When a more innocent and dreadfully cute alien race is threatened by another cloud things become a little more urgent.

Utterly spoiling the plot.

I love the idea of giant clouds of hostile nanotechnology slowly crawling though space following massive spikey lures to their eventual explosive destination which might be a firework display for a race sitting sixteen thousand light years above the Milky Way.

[0] took over a week to read
[1] took about 2-3 hours

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